Shanur Miah's Pitch

My storyline starts off with a chase right from the beginning, i want my story to be revolved around a briefcase full of money and several gangs would be after this. The film would start in a dark alleyway and i would like to film on a rainy day because we would be able to take advantage of the rain and add special effects while editing. As we have chosen crime as our genre i want a big fight scene involving knives. After the running for so long he wouldn't  be able to run anymore and he would run out of stamina and slowly  this would allow the the gang to surround him, at that point he would beg them not to hit him and tell them they can share the money. he would get hit a few times and when they get a knife out and try to stab him, the undercover police come just in time to stop them.